Kamis, 05 Mei 2011

Madesu:A Little Too Not Over You

Hey.today i don't feel good.yeah whatever.fake smiles,fake laughs,fake.but still,at least i didn't frown in front of anyone.sorry.for being fake all day.so i'm gonna write chapter 8.i promised to write about mimi here.but why not a little bit of franna and nachael (venna michael)?you knowwww,that little feelings that venna has left for michael.enjoy!


naomi walked to the parking lot and saw michael with his truck.she smiled.she was still wearing her cheerio outfit.she came to him.he was smiling too.but his and her smile was different.it was like,he wasn't smiling.but well,she ignored it.

"hey big boy" she said

"so,where are we going?"

"hmmm what about a little place called bakmi golek near school?i hear they serve good stuff"

"bakmi golek here we come"

they went inside mihcael's truck and drove to bakmi golek.it wasn't so crowded so they were lucky.they sat on a table near the window and ordered some meals.

"so naomi,i wanna ask you a question" said michael "actually i wanted to ask this question for a very long time"

"shoot me" she said

"well,i noticed something about you.well,besides that fine ass you got down there" he said looking down for a second and looked back at her "you like me or something?"

she almost choked at her cola "er what?"

"i mean,are you in to me?" he said

"who says?"

"okay little missy.i'll explain something about me.i have three gifts.my voice,my punky hair,and my ability to know if a chick dig me" he said with a cool tone.

"hm i admit,i sorta like you" she said confidentally "BUT i also notice that you like venna"

he became quite and he looked down "i'm afraid that might be true" then he looked back up "but she's with that bastard fransis"

"well,cool it down four eyes" she said "you see,i also have three gifts.my voice,this over here *pointing at her fronts*,and my ability to be a bitch"

"so?"

"you want to make her jealous,don't you boy?" she said leaning forward "go out with me and show her that you're the boss here and maybe then you'll get her back"

"you got a point there" he said while thinking

he agreed to it.michael really want to get venna back.it sucked for naomi,because she actually liked him.but this plan gave her a chance to spend time with him more often.that's the best she could do.so the went home.michael drove to naomi's house and drove back to his.

school day.

the whole school stared at michael and naomi walked down the hallway holding hands.of course.the top bitch in the school and the top badass in the school were together.it was like,the best combination.everyone moved away from their way.they were scared.naomi was happy to be able to be with michael.but michael didn't feel the same.he just wanted venna back and make her jealous.

"i gotta go to my locker" said naomi

"okay" then he gave her a peck "just to make sure that everybody knows we're dating" he said

she blushed.she almost fainted.but then she went to her locker.she saw chacha was there,looking through her locker.

"so you're with michael now?" chacha said

"yes.and i see you're with evodie" naomi said

"true.and i'm hoping for a long term relationship with him.you?"

"i dunno cha.just let it flow" she said "let's go to class"

the first period was PE.they played some volley.anya came to naomi and chacha.

"hey girls" anya said

"what do you want?" said naomi

"can i touch you abs?" said chacha while staring at anya's abs

"can i talk to you for a minute naomi?" anya said

"whatever ab girl.say what you want to say" said naomi

"stop messing around with michael.i know he doesn't like you" said anya

"what?what did you just say?" said naomi

"stop.because the boy is mine" said anya

"excuse me?okay,clearly he's not in to you either shrimp head" said naomi

"not yet" she said.

"okay that's enough.this is war and i'm the top bitch in this school.you own nothing" said naomi

"we'll see about that" said anya

then they played volley.it was obvious that naomi and anya were having a battle of their own.anya did a smash and naomi couldn't took it.this bitch.naomi thought.oh it is on.

school was over.time for madesu club.michael and naomi was sitting together.venna stared at them both with the 'wtf' look.

"you okay babe?" asked fransis to venna

"oh.i'm okay" said venna

mr veri was giving the solo assignment again.fransis wanted to sing first.he got up and started talking

"so,i'm going to sing this song for my girlfriend" he said.venna smiled "okay,so here it goes"

Jet setter
Go getter
Nothing better

Call me Mr. been there done that
Top model chick to your every day hood rat
Less than all but more than a few
But I've never met one like you

he danced a bit and did a little twirls on his feet

Been all over the world
Done a little bit of everything
Little bit of everywhere
With a little bit of everyone
All the girls I've been with
Things I've seen it takes much to impress
But sure enough you go it makes your soul stand up from all the rest

I can be in love
But I just don't know
Baby one thing is for certain
Whatever you do it's working
All the girls don't matter
In your presence can't do what you do
There's a million girls around but I don't see no one but you

Girl you're so one in a million
You are
Baby you're the best I ever had
Best I ever had
And I'm certain that
There ain't nothing better
No there ain't nothing better than this

now he was staring right at venna

Timing girl
Only one in the world
Just one of a kind
She mine

Ooh all that I can think about is what this thing could be
A future baby
Baby you're one of a kind
That means that you're the only one for me
Only one for me

venna just smiled.listening to her boyfriend's awesome voice.but something is weird.she didn't feel it.she didn't feel the song.

Baby you're so one in a million
You are
Baby you're the best I ever had
Best I ever had
And I'm certain that
There ain't nothing better
No there ain't nothing better than this

he finished the song with a huge smile and he gave venna a peck.they never really kiss.like real kiss.never.probably just a little peck or a kiss on the cheek.but never actually kiss.madesu club was over.venna said to fransis that she wanted to go home by herself that day.venna saw michael all by himself on his locker.she came to him.

"you're dating naomi now?" she said

"yes,problem?" he said while closing his locker

"well,no.but she's a bitch.you deserve better" even though venna liked to hang out with her,she didn't really like naomi's bitchy attitude

"why would you care?you're with that shitty dude fransis" he said looking right at venna

"well.i just.........whatever.i don't need this" venna said almost walked away,but michael pulled her hand and connected their eyes again

"break up with him ven" he said

"what the hell?" she said trying to let go his grip from her

"i know you like me.i like you too.can't you see?we're meant to be together" he said

"are you mad or something?of course i won't break up with fransis"

"shut up.we all know that you're just using him to be popular"

"fuck you michael" she said

"i want to be with you.just,please" he said still holding her arm "i think about you everyday and i think i have feelings............feelings for you" he sighed "just,give me a chance"

"i.............i can't dump fransis.i just can't.and i don't have feelings for you" she said "not anymore" her eyes were looking at other direction

"look at me.if you don't have feelings for me,why did you came to me now?"

"um,i don't know okay michael" she said "i don't know.maybe it's because i always say your name in my dreams.maybe it's because i always think about you even when i'm with fransis.i don't know.and this is killing me" she said with tears

he hugged and calmed her "it's okay,everything is going to be okay.i'm not forcing you to love me.i'm not forcing you to break up with fransis now.but i want you to think about my request.give me a chance.one more chance.and i'll make you happy" he said

"i'm so confused with my feelings right now" she said still hugging michael so close and cried at his shirt.

"you'll figure it out" he said brushing her hair "i'll take you home,okay?"

"no,i'll go by myself.i need time" she said

"be careful" he said
they were alone in the hallway.venna went home walking.she thought about everything.yes,she were in love with fransis at first sight,but those feelings are fading through time.and she met michael.she get to know him,and she thought that she was in love with him too.and she still had feelings for him.even now.she couldn't stop thinking about michael,every night,every morning,every afternoon.but why?she knew that moment,she still had feelings for michael.but she didn't want to break fransis's heart.not again.she've made a mistake,and she didn't want to repeat that mistake again.even though she was in love with michael,not fransis.

the next day,school was on.time for madesu club.the solo assignment.venna's turn.she didn't say anything,she just started singing.


Comparisons are easily done
Once you've had a taste of perfection
Like an apple hanging from a tree
I picked the ripest one, I still got the seed

You said move on, where do I go?
I guess second best is all I will know

'Cause when I'm with him I am thinking of you
Thinking of you, what you would do
If you were the one who was spending the night
Oh, I wish that I was looking into your eyes

You're like an Indian Summer in the middle of winter
Like a hard candy with a surprise center
How do I get better once I've had the best?
You said there's tons of fish in the water, so the waters I will test

He kissed my lips, I taste your mouth, oh!
He pulled me in, I was disgusted with myself


'Cause when I'm with him I am thinking of you
Thinking of you, what you would do
If you were the one who was spending the night
Oh, I wish that I was looking into your eyes



You're the best, and yes, I do regret
How I could let myself let you go
Now, now the lesson's learned
I touched it, I was burned
Oh, I think you should know!

'Cause when I'm with him I am thinking of you
Thinking of you, what you would do
If you were the one who was spending the night
Oh, I wish that I was looking into your, your eyes
Looking into your eyes, looking into your eyes

Oh, won't you walk through?
And bust in the door and take me away?
Oh, no more mistakes
'Cause in your eyes I'd like to stay, stay

after that song,fransis was confused.but he ignored it.he believed when venna said that she just liked katy perry and that song.it wasn't mean anything.then it was michael's turn.just like venna,he just started singing.

It never crossed my mind at all
That's what I tell myself
What we had has come and gone
You're better off with someone else

It's for the best I know it is but I see you
Sometimes I try to hide what I feel inside
And I turn around, you're with him now
I just can't figure it out

Tell me why you're so hard to forget
Don't remind me, I'm not over it
Tell me why I can't seem to face the truth
I'm just a little too not over you, not over you

Aren't memories supposed to fade?
What's wrong with my heart?
Shake it off, let it go
Didn't think it'd be this hard

Should be strong, movin' on but I see you
Sometimes I try to hide what I feel inside
And I turn around, you're with him now
I just can't figure it out

Tell me why you're so hard to forget
Don't remind me, I'm not over it
Tell me why I can't seem to face the truth
I'm just a little too not over you

Maybe I regret everything I said
No way to take it all back, yeah
Now I'm on my own, how I let you go
I'll never understand
I'll never understand!

Tell me why you're so hard to forget
Don't remind me, I'm not over it
Tell me why I can't seem to face the truth
I'm just a little too not over you

Tell me why you're so hard to forget
Don't remind me, I'm not over it
Tell me why I can't seem to face the truth
And I really don't know what to do
I'm just a little too not over you, not over you


naomi looked at michael after that song.he really does love her.a michael fell in love with a venna.shit.why can't i be with him?she thought.okay,venna knew that song was for her,and michael knew that venna's song was for him.michael was pretty sure that venna were going to dump fransis.but he didn't know when will she do it.on the other hand,venna was super confused about how she felt.for fransis and for michael.who did she really love?it was a hard stuff.

madesu club was over.fransis and venna,chacha and evodie,michael and naomi,jodi and jessica went home together.yasmine,eka,icha,and albert went to sevel matraman.

darrent was there in the hallway.all by himself.he was thinking about how to get the quarterback position that he really wanted.then there was this girl.she was blonde.wearing a bruno-mars-hat,white shirt,black leather jacket,jeans,and black leather boots.she seemed confused.darrent decided to help her

"hey,i never see you around before" he said to her

"well hey.yes,i am kinda new here.i transfered two days ago" she said

"cool.are you looking for someone?"

"yes actually.i'm looking for this teacher,um,mr veni or something"

"mr veni?oh you mean mr veri,that lame music teacher.what up with him?" 

"well,i wanted to join this singing club that he teaches and..."

"wait,you want to join madesu club?seriously?"

"why?what's wrong with that" she said

"oh nothing.here,i'll show you his office" darrent said

"thanks.by the way,my name is tasya" 

END OF THE CHAPTER.okay this is super long.i end it here.tasya will be a surprise.so venna is confused and stuff you know.many dramas,angst,romance ahead.the songs are one in a million-neyo,thinking of you-katy perry,and a little too not over you-david archuleta.get ready for chapter 9!writing fanfic is awesome!!

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